Please critique my email, I need feedback!

[NadineC64]

Hello,

 We are a nutrition company selling to healthcare professionals (mostly chiropractors ) and their patients. Utimately, I am trying to make our emails informative, to the point, witty, current, and engaging. Our goal is to generate sales and hopefully, new customers through forwards. I am new to CC and email marketing. I would appreciate any and all feedback!

Thanks,

Erin Tiger

Nutri-West Mid Atlantic

[MyNewsGirl Solution Provider]

Hi - can you add a link so we can view the entire email?  It's hard to see it all in the screen shot.  Thanks!
 

[NadineC64]

https://ui.constantcontact.com/rnavmap/emcf/email/edit?flow=edit&agent.uid=1110026412348

[NadineC64]

Did that work? Or no? Will it be able to be seen since I linked it via our account? I'm new to all of this!

[Jarrad_M CTCT Employee]

Hi,

That link is not working. You can follow these steps to add your email to the board.

Thanks,