Please critique my recent email blast.

[BillM131]

Hoping I can get some feedback on my recent email blast. We don't have the archive function yet so hoping this link works. I got it from my preview email (link for if you can't see the email).

http://campaign.r20.constantcontact.com/render?llr=dg7cu5dab&v=001mwaRHiQxrQeFZvqvbGLdy7EongK5efwy5b...

[BillT.W]

The link isn't working - sorry!

[CathyH2]

The link doesn't work.

[Marissa_R Moderator]

Hi Everyone!

I went in and took the link and shortened it for you so you can all check it out!

http://tinyurl.com/6vvvdcz

[CathyH2]

I think you should link your logo at the top of the email to the landing page of your website.  Some customers may be interested in something else besides golf tees.

I would also underline the "Join my Mailing List" at the bottom of the email so customers know they just have to click it.

Very nice email!!!!!

[BillM131]

Thank you Marissa for getting the link to work.

Thank you for the critique. Didn't get any hits off this past email. Had some "opens" but no orders. Will try again with another one.

[Marissa_R Moderator]

You're welcome Bill!  Good luck with your next one! Do you have the Social Share bar so that your customers/contacts can share on their social networks? That could help with sales as well. Do you also share on your Social Networks once you send the email?