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2nd Newsletter with Revisions - Critiques Welcome!

Occasional Advisor

2nd Newsletter with Revisions - Critiques Welcome!

Hi All,

 

This is the second attempt at our newsletter.  This is geared toward patients of our Urgent Care practice with the following intentions:

 

  • Generate interest in "Back to School" services (Physicals, vaccinations, etc.) through informative advertorials
  • Complete our Customer Service Survey
  • Generate interest in our "Text and Save" promotion

 

CLICK HERE TO VIEW OUR NEWSLETTER

 

Let me know if we're accomplishing this or where we're falling short.

 

Thanks for your help!

Andy

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Honored Contributor

Re: 2nd Newsletter with Revisions - Critiques Welcome!

Hi,

 

I thought your email looked great. I feel your call to action to get students in to get vaccinated worked well and loved seeing a QR code in your email.

 

Offering an incentive to take your survey is  a great way to encourage participation. The only criticism I have is that the email lacked color. I wouldn't go over board with color, something subtle. That's just my opinion.

 

Overall, great job!

Jarrad

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Occasional Advisor

Re: 2nd Newsletter with Revisions - Critiques Welcome!

Thanks Jarrod.  I appreciate your feedback.  We'll keep trying to improve with each newsletter!

 

Best,
Andy

Honored Contributor

Re: 2nd Newsletter with Revisions - Critiques Welcome!

Great!

Jarrad

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