We would love some feedback before we send out our first newsletter- what do you guys think?
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Thanks for sharing your newsletter.
You have a very clever title for your newsletter!
I liked that you included a link to your Facebook page.
Nice use of the Forward to a Friend link and good placement of your Join My Mailing List button.
It was a little hard to read the copy but it looks like your email was not too long.
Thanks for sharing,
Please don't shout to loud, if you have a quote from a customer put it on the new letter it works wonders,
title Washing dogs for a good cause (our pappered pochs at shower time) mix the words, play on what your clients say to their dogs and pets) but other than that it looks great
Just glancing through and noticed the "S" in "saturday" isn't capitalized under the we're washing dogs for a cause section and it should be "year's supply" but I absolutely love the title. Very cute!