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Any feedback on my email would be appreciated!

Valued Contributor

Any feedback on my email would be appreciated!

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Honored Contributor

Re: Any feedback on my email would be appreciated!

In this world of email overload, I'm all about brief to the point messages.

 

I can't help but feel this is missing something.  It's got a beginning and an end but I'd like to see some more content ( its could be brief) about the restaurant.

 

Where do the addresses get collected from?  That has a great deal to do with what I would suggest to add to the piece.

 

Tony Schaefer
Constant Contact Solution Provider and SMS Marketing Specialist
www.cliquemarketing.biz


 

 

Valued Contributor

Re: Any feedback on my email would be appreciated!

Email addresses are collected by the restaurant in two different ways.  One is via the opt in form on their webiste.  Two is by having the restaurants employees have the customers fill out an opt in email collection card we provide them with, which they then mail to us for data entry into their email database.  Here is the the restaurant's web url: http://charliesoftoledo.com/.  If you  click "Deals by Email" you will see the opt in form we designed for them to use for online email collection.

 

Thank you so much for your response!

Re: Any feedback on my email would be appreciated!

It's a bit basic and 'exclusive' is not spelt properly.

 

Good luck!

 


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Occasional Advisor

Re: Any feedback on my email would be appreciated!

You might want to add to forward to a friend and add the link for "Deals by Email"


@kinetica wrote:

Email addresses are collected by the restaurant in two different ways.  One is via the opt in form on their webiste.  Two is by having the restaurants employees have the customers fill out an opt in email collection card we provide them with, which they then mail to us for data entry into their email database.  Here is the the restaurant's web url: http://charliesoftoledo.com/If you  click "Deals by Email" you will see the opt in form we designed for them to use for online email collection.

 

Thank you so much for your response!


 

Occasional Participant

Re: Any feedback on my email would be appreciated!

Aside from the afore mentioned items, I would include a pic or two of the inside of the establishment.  I like to see what kind of ambiance to expect if I come to your restaurant.