We run an indoor inflatble family fun center that is clean, green and fun. We send out weekely emails with open play/jump schedules and include promotions with them. Would like tog et soe feedback on the content and the style.
Hello @JumpingJungle ,
The information that you are sending out in your emails is great and you even have a weekly schedule set up! It seems like the 2 column layout works perfectly for you, as you have laid out your information to make the most of the two-column template. Here are some recommendations:
- There are a few different colors throughout the email (green, orange, red, blue). If possible I would recommend sticking to just a couple of correlating colors. You can also use our Insert Link to change your link colors to a different color than the default blue, take a look here for help.
- The text on the right side is larger than the text on the left. The larger text could be harder to read on a mobile device. I would recommend keeping consistency with font and size throughout the email if possible. (Normally a font size of 10-12 works well on both desktop, tablet and mobile). - There appears to be some extra spaces at the end of the right block, adding some extra length to the email. I would recommend deleting that space out to help keep the email a little shorter.
I hope this helps!
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