This is my latest email to raise awareness of my Color and B&W print services to my customers who have already purchased at least one print job from my shop.
Constructive criticism welcome.
The "short & sweet" appeal is good!
The images have been deleted so I don't see them. It appears your email address in incorrect as it doesn't contain an "@" symbol and it should be in all lower case, not an assortment of case.
I would also recommend standardizing or limiting font colors & styles as to "streamline & professionalize" the piece.
I was also a bit confused on the relevance of the lenthy video.
Hope I'm not a total Debbie Downer!
Perhaps consider offering a coupon? or sample pricing?
I'm in Arlington, VA and I run a nonprofit - I'd be interested to hear more of why someone would choose you...and a coupon or deal is always a good start!