I think your campaign looks good. I like the subtle use of colors and the use of text for a complete visual experience. I just spotted a small typo --"I can help you get started with email marketing today" needs space between 'you' and 'get'. Other than that minor error, your capaign resonates with me--it is clear and concise.
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