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Feedback request for Christmas voucher sales email I'm sending today...

Occasional Contributor

Feedback request for Christmas voucher sales email I'm sending today...

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Occasional Visitor

Re: Feedback request for Christmas voucher sales email I'm sending today...

Overall I think it looks really good. Clean, to the point. I went to your website and checked out the coast steering pictures though and you might consider using the picture with the cliff as that really eye catching and made me wish I had known about your company when we were in Ireland! 

Occasional Visitor

Re: Feedback request for Christmas voucher sales email I'm sending today...

My suggestion is to add a word, such as "Ultimate", in front of Coasteering to balance the look of the three offerings.

 

Good Luck!

Occasional Contributor

Re: Feedback request for Christmas voucher sales email I'm sending today...

Much appreciated, thanks for the comments guys!