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JonM03
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First ever attempt at a newsletter!

Hello all,

 

I just started a new gig where I will be responsible for an urgent care clinic's web presence and web marketing.  Anyway, this is my first ever attempt at an email comapign and I would love to hear your thoughts on what I have so far.  The template is actually custom and is optimized for mobile (hopefully).  

 

Feel free to share your thoughts on everything; color scheme, graphics, content, etc...

 

Link: http://bit.ly/Kj43iB

 

THANKS!!!  :robottongue:

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HannaO8
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Registered: ‎05-24-2012

Re: First ever attempt at a newsletter!

I thought it was nice, very clean. I like how it says you are receiving this becuase you are our customer. helps folks to remember this is not spam!

 

 

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JonM03
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Re: First ever attempt at a newsletter!

Thanks! I appreciate the kind words.

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MatthewS432
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Re: First ever attempt at a newsletter!

Looks clean. Great job.

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wilc0906
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Re: First ever attempt at a newsletter!

looks clean and clear, I am also getting advice on my newsletters, can you let me know whcih template you used as I want to try make mine better for mobile users...

 

many thanks

Bridget

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Re: First ever attempt at a newsletter!

Hi Bridget,

 

The first 9 templates when you go to create a new email are perfectly optimized for mobile. We have a thread regarding mobile newsletters here you can check out.

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Re: First ever attempt at a newsletter!

Jon - it looks great!  From a creative standpoint, it is crisp and it's great that you don't have to search for the contact info - all positioned at top which looks good.  The titles stand out - it is well done!  All the best!

Cathy Ann Drury