Hi Ingrid! There are a few adjustments you could make to your email:
1. Do you have a logo? I would add that at the top of your email to give it some branding. You always want your logo visible at the top so people recognize you when they open your emails.
2. Do you have a website? If you do, you should add a button/link to your site to drive people there so they can learn more about your business. Same with any social media pages you might have.
3. It's not 100% clear what you want the reader to do after reading your email. Do you want them to call you? Visit your website? Whatever you want them to do (your Call to Action), should be obvious and towards the top of the email.