I'd love to get some feedback!

[NeilBrown]

I work in the marine business, and I send out a monthly newsletter to my customers. It includes; tips for surfers, upcoming events, and stock pictures of our choice boat of the month.

What do you think of my last one?

http://campaign.r20.constantcontact.com/render?ca=53be9b04-b414-475b-9621-22dbc1d05070&preview=true&...

[ThatMatt]

Your email looks great, Neil. I would suggest making a banner for the email header with your information and logo on it to add a splash of color to the email. I'd also throw in a quick introduction to the email right above "In This Issue." Just a line or two explaining why you're sending the email and why your customers would be interested in it. Other than that, you have a nice balance of text to images and a great layout. Good job!

-Matt

[NeilBrown]

Thanks for your help Matt! I think I'll try that with the next issue.