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Invitation to Wine Dinner

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Invitation to Wine Dinner

This is the first email I create for this client (I'm a Business Partner/Solution Provider).  The challenge here is that the Marchetti Family owns 3 restaurants.  Is it clear that the invitation is only for Columbus Park but the coupon is good for all three restaurants?

 

Open to other ideas to improve the template and the email.

 

Wine Dinner Invite

 

Thanks!


David Fischer

Solutions for Growth

David Fischer
Solutions for Growth
Master Certified Solution Provider
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Re: Invitation to Wine Dinner

Hi David,

 

First off, can I come to the event? Just kidding

 

I thought you had a very classy email that speaks to the quality of the restaurant. When I read your coupon I had no problem understanding that it allowed me to use it at all restaurants. Possibly adding some text that let's your customers know that could prevent any confusion, if that's what your nervous about.

 

Thanks,

Jarrad

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Re: Invitation to Wine Dinner

I think your email was quite clear in the coupon being available for all 3 restaurants. i would have made the invite at the top a little more pronounced. Other than that - nice looking email!

 

Debi Katsmar

 

PS - the closing block  - I think "enthusiast" should be plural. 

Debi Katsmar
PRowl Communications
905-734-8273
debi@prowlcommunications.com
2013-2018 Certified Solution Provider
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Re: Invitation to Wine Dinner

Debi thank you for the positive feedback and catching the missing "s!"

David Fischer
Solutions for Growth
Master Certified Solution Provider
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Re: Invitation to Wine Dinner

You're welcome.

 

Debi Katsmar
PRowl Communications
905-734-8273
debi@prowlcommunications.com
2013-2018 Certified Solution Provider