This is the first email I create for this client (I'm a Business Partner/Solution Provider). The challenge here is that the Marchetti Family owns 3 restaurants. Is it clear that the invitation is only for Columbus Park but the coupon is good for all three restaurants?
Open to other ideas to improve the template and the email.
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First off, can I come to the event? Just kidding
I thought you had a very classy email that speaks to the quality of the restaurant. When I read your coupon I had no problem understanding that it allowed me to use it at all restaurants. Possibly adding some text that let's your customers know that could prevent any confusion, if that's what your nervous about.
I think your email was quite clear in the coupon being available for all 3 restaurants. i would have made the invite at the top a little more pronounced. Other than that - nice looking email!
PS - the closing block - I think "enthusiast" should be plural.