I really liked the way your email looked. Having the coupons listed in the left column was a great idea. Nice use of video. I liked how the colors of the typeface in your logo matched the colors in the email. One thing I didn't notice was a link to your social networks. I'd consider adding those in your next email.
I hope this helps,
I liked everything until the end. I would have liked to see the address again, and maybe a location like "across from Target" . Also, I would include a firstname.lastname@example.org email at the end, and and invitation to call or email us today. We'd love to answer your skin care questions....so if people have a desire to ask a question they can do so immediately. We get lots of hits from our info@ email.
The newsletter was good, but I noticed a lot of things being repeated in the two articles for the teens. I would love to talk with you and help you with your content. I LOVE to write and would be happy to extend my writing skills to you. You can email me at email@example.com, if interested.