Very nice and clean. Is your logo linked? Also there is that empty space you might want to fill in.
Thank you for the crtique! I took a screen shot of the email, so our wordmark is linked when we send it out, just not in this post.
For me the font is difficult to read, it looks chopped.
I would not read this because of the font issue.
On another note, the model needs make-up for a photo shoot, the hands are in the lap instead of at the keyboard, and the smile does not look genuine, but looks forced. She does not looked relaxed.
I felt the content of the messge was done well.
As a reader I do not know what studies 145 is ... and I need a portfolio? Is this somehting I need prior to enrolling in classes? I assume the audience that is receivng the e-mail will know what 145 is and the whole "portfiolio" requirement... right?
Sounds like a great idea.
All your text is smooth on my end but you could lower the font just a little as was stated. But I for one did not look at the model or worker other then a real person working there so I am not sure I agree with that but to each their own I guess