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Please Critique: Email to gain enrollments in a class

Occasional Participant

Please Critique: Email to gain enrollments in a class

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Occasional Advisor

Re: Please Critique: Email to gain enrollments in a class

Very nice and clean. Is your logo linked? Also there is that empty space you might want to fill in.

Occasional Participant

Re: Please Critique: Email to gain enrollments in a class

Hi Danelle,

 

Thank you for the crtique! I took a screen shot of the email, so our wordmark is linked when we send it out, just not in this post.

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Occasional Advisor

Re: Please Critique: Email to gain enrollments in a class

Great !!! Colors flow really nice and it is short but gives enough information.

Occasional Participant

Re: Please Critique: Email to gain enrollments in a class

For me the font is difficult to read, it looks chopped.

I would not read this because of the font issue.

 

On another note, the model needs make-up for a photo shoot, the hands are in the lap instead of at the keyboard, and the smile does not look genuine, but looks forced. She does not looked relaxed. 

 

I felt the content of the messge was done well.

As a reader I do not know what studies 145 is ... and I need a portfolio? Is this somehting I need prior to enrolling in  classes? I assume the audience that is receivng the e-mail will know what 145 is and the whole "portfiolio" requirement... right?  

 

Sounds like a great idea.

Occasional Advisor

Re: Please Critique: Email to gain enrollments in a class

All your text is smooth on my end but you could lower the font just a little as was stated. But I for one did not look at the model or worker other then a real person working there so I am not sure I agree with that but to each their own I guess