Thanks for sharing your email with us! It's a little difficult to read the font, but I'd be happy to offer a few pointers!
I love how your YouTube button is up near the top and how you have the Simple Share toolbar enabled! Great job with those! Are you on any other Social Media sites? If so, definitely add those to the top next to YouTube.
Also, you might want to try a one column (full width) template and see how that looks! It might make it a bit shorter in length.
I hope that helps and can't wait to see your next email!
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