I'm running a campaign where people spend "X" dollar amount they will receive "Y" amount in free goods from our company. I don't want it to be too over whelming as it's a short message but I dont' want it completely boring either. I'm stuck on the overall design and the body paragraph. Please help. This is my first user discussion post so I'm hoping that I'm copying everything right so it can be viewed:
Hello, I thought it was excellent. The only thing would change was two awkward sentences: I believe it was the first sentence. I would would word it like this: "Now when you place an order with us" The other was near the bottom: ...fan on Facebook
Hope that helps.