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ThomasK06
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Registered: ‎11-28-2011

Please critique my email

email i want to send, educating customers (trucking companies) on new federal regulation banning handheld cell phone use in commercial motor vehicles.  My intent is to a) educate and b) suggest gps tracking as alternate technology.  Please review my email, need help getting readers to click through to my website for further information:

 

http://archive.constantcontact.com/fs047/1102756959760/archive/1108964622658.html

 

Thanks!

 

Tom

Jarrad_M
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Re: Please critique my email

Hi Thomas,

 

I really liked this newsletter. I thought it was great that it was educational. You shared what you knew about your industry and shared it with your contacts. I liked the Q & A section as well as the info on the new regulations.

 

Good job!

Jarrad

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ThomasK06
Posts: 28
Registered: ‎11-28-2011

Re: Please critique my email

Yeah, and I actually got some click-throughs.  Sent to 91 people; 20 opens, 7 clicks through to read blog.  Better than previous efforts.