It looks like the liink you shared isn't working! Can you try sharing again? Here are some directions.
If you are still having trouble please let me know the name of the email and we can help.
I used the link from the "social media share" and it's not working, can you help? what am I doing wrong? Thanks, Mari
The name is "Dynamic Discussions #17 April OT Month ALL". I already mailed it, can you still critique? Thanks! Mari
Thanks for allowing us to critique your work. I think you did a great job with your newsletter. Here are a few things I suggest you revise for future emails:
1. Subject Line Length - High-scoring emails have shorter subject lines to increase opens.
Shorter subject lines result in over 40% higher open rates, and are easier to view on mobile devices. Aside from character count, putting the most important words first gets your message across even to the most time-starved readers.
2. Font Style - Keeping font types to a minimum of two for the entire email creates an easily scannable, attractive communication. If you want some variety, try using one font type for headings and subheads, and a different type for the rest of the email text.
3. Email Length - Long emails force recipients to scroll down several times. You can increase the width of your email to make it look less lengthily.
Keep up the good work.
Thanks & regards,
I loved your banner across the top.
I liked the flow of the page but sort of felt the coupon might have been better at the bottom. The grey out side the main box sort of created a weird optical illusion on my PC like I was looking into a tunnel to see the page. Made me a little dizzy for a second. I think I might have liked white on white better or a stronger contrasting color.
I really liked the way you offered social share buttons too.