I am a new member and have made my first pass at designing our first newsletter. I am not sure what additional verbage to add. Please critique our newsletter and let us know your thoughts.. Thank you in advance.
Could be me, but I think the URL you are using is to the email within your account? I can't see it and am not sure others can give you the feedback you'd like if this link remains. Jarrad provided some advice on a prior post on how to share you email and perhaps we should create a post on that for all to read. In the meantime, he's his advice:
"You have two options for sharing your email in the Community. You can either take a screenshot and save it as a jpeg, or you can use our Archive product to add a link to it.
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