The email is "ok" and perhaps might benefit from providing more information at the top, to inform readers about what the content is so they don't have to scroll down. This can be accomplished with a table of contents. Also, consider designing the template to match your website, including the navigation bar. By doing so, you encourage people to go to your website and increase engagement - it also seems that the social media sharebar is not part of the email.
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