What's your main Call to Action? I'd say the top picture is a bit large. And, I'd figure out what your main hope is. Are you trying to get people to the event you mention at the end of the email? If so, that should be higher on the page.
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In addition to the previous comments I'd suggest you take a look at the piece with images disabled and see how it flows and what message is visible to the reader. All versions of Outlook, and many other email clients won't display those images by default which are crucial to your message.
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