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"Nail to Metal", critique my email please?

Occasional Contributor

"Nail to Metal", critique my email please?

Our subject heading was "Nail to Metal", a powerful slogan in our MetalTack campain. We are an industrial manufacturing company trying to spread the word/sell some products. I had to cut the last part a little short, but it does have a link as to how to contact/email Ken. Thanks!!

 

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Honored Contributor

Re: "Nail to Metal", critique my email please?

Take a look at it with graphics disabled and see if it conveys the message you wish.

 

Tony Schaefer
Constant Contact Solution Provider and SMS Marketing Specialist
www.cliquemarketing.biz




 

 

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Re: "Nail to Metal", critique my email please?

I really like your email, but I think there could be room for improvement on your subject line. I'm not in the same industry so I'm not sure how eye catching "nail to metal" is, could be fine on it's own but you could always punch it up to something like "Finally nail to metal". What is this product replacing, welding? Could go with something like "Give the welder a rest, finally nail to metal". Just some friendly suggestions, anything to get your opened email in front of as many eyes as possible

 

 

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Occasional Contributor

Re: "Nail to Metal", critique my email please?

Interesing.  Wondering if the CC program tells you how many watch the video.

Honored Contributor

Re: "Nail to Metal", critique my email please?

You can have the link tracked so you'll know how many started the process, but you can't track if they "viewed" it or not without placing some action at the end of the video to measure.

 

Tony Schaefer
CTCT Solution Provider and SMS Marketing Specialist
Constant Contact All Star 2009-2010-2011-2012
www.cliquemarketing.biz