Critique my campain

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Critique my campain

Hello,

 

Would love to hear what people think about the eshot below.

 

http://conta.cc/1mlEpSa 

 

Thanks.

 

Harvey

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Occasional Participant

Your photos are great, this is really nice.

 

Try a frame around your main image, or go to a white background.

 

Perhaps consider a different first sentence: 

 

This will be the ideal gift for this time of year.  

 

Try:

 

An ideal holiday gift: your brand on your client's wrist...

 

Good luck, Lisa

Regular Participant

Hi HarveyL46,

 

I agree with a different first sentence. Additionally, you don't have to tell your readers to 'click the image below', the readers will know to click it. :smileyface: If you want a secondary link before the photo, try 'learn more'. 

 

Hope your campaign was a success!