Thank you for reaching out to the Community about your email! We’re always happy to help answer any questions and provide an extra set of eyes. The first thing that caught my eye on your email is the grass image background. This was a great patter to select as it goes well with the field you're in (no pun intended). Your email is also short and sweet. Shorter emails help keep your content more targeted and even improve open rates. Not only this, but your call-to-action is very clear.
The few suggestions I have are more of formatting things. For instance I noticed you have sections with a yellow background - but one of them is in a completely different color. All of these sections are also not connected to each other. I would suggest connecting them and setting the same yellow background for all the information above your footer section. If you don't want to connect all the sections, try setting the pre-order button back to a white background to match the text in its section.