Let me know what to improve for our web marketing email

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Let me know what to improve for our web marketing email

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Re: Let me know what to improve for our web marketing email

Hello @AsherE83 , 

 

Great job with your campaign so far!  Here are a couple of suggestions: 

 

  • Headline - "5 Tips for More Conversions!"  - Shortening the headline (and possibly your subject line) to something like this makes it short and sweet.  It also lets your audience know what to expect with a quick glance. 
  • Spacing - under each tip there is some spacing.  If this was tightened up to maybe just one line break after each tip, it might help to shorten the email and make it a quicker read.  
  • Make the Tip # images a little smaller, this could help with the spacing too to be able to shrink these a little and still have a clear break between each tip

I like how you have headlines, a short summary & the learn more links for each tip.  These clicks might help to give you some insight into your audience's interests.  Keep up the great work!  

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Employee

Re: Let me know what to improve for our web marketing email

Hello @AsherE83 , 

 

Great job with your campaign so far!  Here are a couple of suggestions: 

 

  • Headline - "5 Tips for More Conversions!"  - Shortening the headline (and possibly your subject line) to something like this makes it short and sweet.  It also lets your audience know what to expect with a quick glance. 
  • Spacing - under each tip there is some spacing.  If this was tightened up to maybe just one line break after each tip, it might help to shorten the email and make it a quicker read.  
  • Make the Tip # images a little smaller, this could help with the spacing too to be able to shrink these a little and still have a clear break between each tip

I like how you have headlines, a short summary & the learn more links for each tip.  These clicks might help to give you some insight into your audience's interests.  Keep up the great work!  

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