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HI @ClaytonC5

This email looks awesome, great job! The green nicely ties the email together without being too much. I think if you went any lighter it would be distracting. I would double check that the font is all the same throughout--it could be me but there are areas where it looks like another font type.

 

I would consider making your titles more pronounced. Perhaps indenting the titles to match the content alignment and/or adding a white line on the left and right of this area would work.

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You also might be able to center the height of the text a bit so it's not sitting on the block below. The best way to do this would be a table (you could add the white, the alignment and the centering all at once!). I might just shrink the content you have in the footer just a bit so the email isn't as long.

 

Hope this helps, 

 

 

 

 

Hannah M.
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HI @ClaytonC5

This email looks awesome, great job! The green nicely ties the email together without being too much. I think if you went any lighter it would be distracting. I would double check that the font is all the same throughout--it could be me but there are areas where it looks like another font type.

 

I would consider making your titles more pronounced. Perhaps indenting the titles to match the content alignment and/or adding a white line on the left and right of this area would work.

2015-10-19_8-27-32.jpg

You also might be able to center the height of the text a bit so it's not sitting on the block below. The best way to do this would be a table (you could add the white, the alignment and the centering all at once!). I might just shrink the content you have in the footer just a bit so the email isn't as long.

 

Hope this helps, 

 

 

 

 

Hannah M.
Community and Social Media Support

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Thank you for the feedback! Adding the table for the titles makes sense. I was having a hard time getting the height of those blocks just right, so I ended up putting it on the blocks below.