Please critique my campaign

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Re: Please critique my campaign

The words 'greatly' and 'benefit' should be switched around.  Donna

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Solution Provider

Re: Please critique my campaign

Try a red response button. 

Try four emails, each focusing on one area.

A story how it benefitted the employee - made him/her look good or the city - save x-number of dollars, etc.

Include a photo of children at the school where you did an audit. 

Always think WIFM. "What's in it for me?"

 

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Occasional Visitor

Re: Please critique my campaign

Adwords vs Bing Ads, which one is better? I am running several campaigns, but none of them seemed to be effective.
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Re: Please critique my campaign

The ads which are better are the ads which work for you.  Eliminate as many variables as possible and test the same amount of $$$ on each provider.

 

There are many ways to determine where your website traffic is coming from.  Are you interested in Page Views, Clicks, or sales?

 

Google and Bing are both your friends.  Each will help you with analytics!

 

Good luck.

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Solution Provider

Re: Please critique my campaign

You could also put a text call to action after each of the bullter points. Multiple requests for reply can be more effective than one.

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