Please critique my campaign. Are there any suggestions to jazz it up? I like the message of the text but feel it needs something to catch the eye.
Thank you in advance,
Thank you for reaching out to the Community! Your email looks consistent and professional. My recommendation is to start with a catchy subject line. Click here for some more tips on how to get a high Open Rate! Thanks.
I was looking for more feedback on the body and design fo the campaign....not simply sent a link to read...I have had your team submit better critique's previously. Zoe didn't offer much.
I apologize if our previous response was not the critique you were looking for! We would be happy to take another look at the email you provided for any further ideas. In fact one of the suggestions I have is to turn your submit application link into a button instead. Doing this helps catch your reader's attention even more. Have you thought about including a testimonial from someone on your team or someone who has used your service? You can even add a personalized greetings to the beginning of your email. I also would suggest connecting the email address at in the footer of your email to a mailto link. Over all though your email is great! Short, to the point with a clear call to action is definitely the way you want to continue creating them.