Hi, @JenniferB369!
Thanks for sharing your email! As a parent, I get lots of school emails, and I appreciate when they're easy to read! I like your use of dividers between each section. They're clear and consistent. I also like the way you ordered the content where the registration call-to-action is at the top, followed by the school-specific updates, and then the resources for parents. Your branding looks great too!
I have two recommendations for you. The first is for the two sections with the QR codes, which I'm assuming are both images. If I'm viewing your email on my phone, I can't scan the QR code. A simple fix is to add the URL to the image to turn it into a clickable link. Then if the image is tapped, it opens up the page. A second option is to add a link or a button below the image with some clear text that says "Register online," or something similar.
The second recommendation is for the text link as the call-to-action in the kindergarten registration section. It looks great when I view your email on my computer, but on mobile it's a little more subtle and looks a little more like a subheading than a clickable link. My suggestion would be to turn it into a button to give it a little more weight.
Overall, your email looks great! I hope this helps!
