Nice job with that Newsletter.  Very straight forward, easy to read and navigate.   ... View more

Hi,   Good Start, Jana.  I noticed that you have your "back to school" website as a link.  I'm thinking the list below is on that website. Then, I go down further to your calendar and notice some of those links are the same as listed in your center section.  Perhaps you could combine them? Maybe a few more graphics, photos would enhance your newsletter...be a little playful?   Andi ... View more

Unclear: is the the whole house, or are you sharing your house?   Also, you have an unused image space on your sidebar.  But, you haven't finished this yet... You may want to re-post when you are finished... ... View more

Bigger, Tighter headlines...I like the ones with the sidebars on them, particularly for the Social Media and table of contents.   Good content, though.  I'd put the FB at the bottom, and make the pic smaller. ... View more

Beautiful presentation!   ... View more

I agree that the lead article could be reworked to 2-3 paragraphs.  Some of the info is already included on the list and the date of the event should be covered in the headline, ie: Downtown Derby Week, 5/1-5/7, with the sub-heading as is. Then, you could have removed the date to the beginning of the article. A friend in a news department said the "first paragraph should contain: who-what-when-where.  The paragraphs after that are why."     Good colors, not too many.  Lots of good information given.  Overall, nice job. ... View more

I love your email.  It's bright, cheerful, great pics and made me want to read it.  I did actually read it. I did have to admit that the Pabst ad made me wonder.   I noticed the list first because I read down the first column and read up the list going up the right hand side.  Maybe that was just me, though.   As for photo additions, I would edit with Picasa which has a bunch of great features, like frames.   Love what you do!   ... View more