Hi @LynnR663 I have gona ahead and taken a quick look for you.
Great job on using a subject line that conveys urgency and motivation! You can check out Grab Attention with These Subject Line Best Practices for more information.
Ideas/Recoomendations
Add a CTA button like "Start Selling Now" near the top so people don't have to scroll too much to take action. And don't forget to add alternative text for images to make it easier for everyone to access and receive your emails.
Perhaps include testimonials from satisfied customers or a story about a successful sale. This could get more people to take action on your email.
You could also add a timer or mention the limited time of the promotion to generate a sense of urgency.
Great email overall and hopefully these suggestions give you some ideas.
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