Hello @JamesFarley,
I'm happy to take a look at those for you!
1: Looks good overall. The colors are obviously very July Specific, so you'd want to make those more specific for your company if you're building a long-term template. It does seem to be missing a good call-to-action right at the start, but that's not too uncommon with holiday emails. This one definitely feels the most like a 'newsletter'.
2: Short, sweet, and to the point. It starts off with an obvious call to action right after your logo, which is perfect. I will say that on a larger screen, the pure black and white coloring is a little underwhelming though. Mixing in more of the green or blue from your logo into the divider, border, or background color, could really help personalize the template, while also making it a little bit more appealing without distracting people from what's important.
3: This one had a lot more to cover than the others, but it looks like your'e still doing a good job keeping a brief description at the top. The colors feel better than the previous one, and it seems to match your website better as well. I noticed that your website had a lot of wood textures on it, so you might want to use the wooden plank background, and then just be sure that the yellows match the yellow from your website exactly (It's pretty close already.)
Ultimately, I'd say I like the general layout and content design of the first email the best, but there's elements of the other two, especially the first block from the second email, and colors of the third, that could take it to the next level if you combined them.
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