Your layout is clean, and I love that you are using buttons for your CTAs. You make good use of visuals and keep a good text to image ratio. I think you are off to a really good start. However, your email is looooong. I would imagine that not many people actually read the whole thing and might not even scroll through it all to see all of the content. Would sending shorter emails more frequently be possible for you? Here's a little bit of information about the best length for an email.  ... View more