Hey @ScottR0223 thank you for sharing your email! There are some strong points and some areas of opportunity for you here. First, you have the logo and I see that you have a brand scheme in play, but not sure if the extra yellow is really a great angle for you. Your website is so much cleaner with the white space, you may want to work that back into the aesthetics. I would also link your logo to your website and all images to something relevant online, a page on your site
I love the clean and easy layout of the email, very nice. Your headline statement does start to explain the purpose of your email, but it's missing a strong featured image. Your three images do a nice job of taking the place of that though, but at the same time the call to action isn't clear stated again below and there isn't a corresponding button. You can actually have contact us/call now be a button that either opens to a website page with a form or dials your phone number direct!
Good job in the footer having some of your company details there, but spread it out a little with som space and breathing room and add social media icons.
I think you are for sure on the right path here, just some adjustments and you'll dial it into gear!
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